This one's a bit of an experiment. I've been playing with digital drawing, pencil sketches and just scratch drawing vectors in Inkscape so there are a few style inconsistencies...
Semi inspired by this T-Shirt. And just in case you've never heard of the expression "The Birds and the Bees" that was the Wikipedea article right there
It's good produced, with both artistically well done lines and colours. Also, the plot (Don't think pervert thoughts, I'm trying to stay serious) is well thought through, resulting in a funny ending. Rapid change of reactions and facial expressions give the feel of speed and progress, turning it into a story that you don't lose the thred of.
Although, I must tell you that the use of the "birds and bees" explanation was kind of a slight mistake, as it isn't really formed correctly (I am not criticizing you, but rather those who made the explanation). Also, the facial expressions tend to be overdone, with what we in my country call "lazy cheeks".
I felt that this was a very well done work, and you should feel proud of this. As Nate said, it looks as if it was actually from the show. The lines were even, not erratic and misshapen, the content was funny and could hold your attention, the speech bubbles were not too intrusive, which was a blessing, and while this concept of "bird and bee making love" has obviously been done quite a few times, this was a hilarious and fresh spin on it. All in all, a fine piece of work, and I look forward to more from you.
My parents never told me the "Birds and the Bees" story. They gave it to me straight. I know it's a story about how reproduction works, but I bet the joke would be funnier if I had some more context.
Although, I must tell you that the use of the "birds and bees" explanation was kind of a slight mistake, as it isn't really formed correctly (I am not criticizing you, but rather those who made the explanation). Also, the facial expressions tend to be overdone, with what we in my country call "lazy cheeks".
In short; well done!
~Cavalier753
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