... for your thoughts run your life. Proverbs 4:23 (depending on translation...) - Appropriate in this case, I think

This is a collaboration with

and kind of a follow up to this:

I think Twi's crazy face in black and white is possibly even freakier than in full colour...
Background available
here.
Individual pony vectors here
[link]Crazy Twilight symbol here
[link]I think I may make a short tutorial/explanation on Inkscape's filter effects that I used for the nighttime filters on the ponies. I defined my own for this comic as the filter I had used previously looked far too blue.
22/08/12 Welcome Equestria Dailyites


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You have successfully done another beautiful job with the scenery. I'm gonna nitpick first and then tell you all the things I love.
Pinkie's chest looks just a bit too buff, mainly in the second panel. Also, in the third panel, I imagine her randomness has her springing into action to chase the firefly, much like her love-able bouncy walk, but I don't feel it. I'm not sure if it's the legs, or if their should be lines to gesture she's jumping with that Pinkie Pie pep we all know and love, but she feels more like she was placed there rather than me feeling she's jumping.
Now to the good! Aside from what I mentioned above, it's as if you pulled a screen cap right from the actual show. I can't really go much into detail about that since such a compliment pretty much sells itself. You do fantastic work. Love the facial expressions, especially Twilight's in the third panel. A strong sense of befuddlement as the unicorn tries to ponder Pinkie's sanity, as it correlates to her keeping her own.
Can't wait for the next one!
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