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The End? - Scootaloo's New Pet Part 4 by DaringDashie The End? - Scootaloo's New Pet Part 4 by DaringDashie
EDIT Just a quick comment, Spitfire's box maybe open but the room will be secure. Dash isn't really cruel, she's not going to stop her favourite flyer flying completely... Maybe she's even got a tiny Wonderbolts outfit too.

Yes, this is the end, I'm not trying to explain that one (That was the problem in the first place!). And I've just managed it within a month of the last one, I'd hoped to do it a little quicker but real life got in the way.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3

I know I've broken several storytelling golden rules, but for me the point of this has been drawing cute pictures of Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash... :D

Spitfire's mane was taken from ~90Sigma's Spitfire Hovering cause I was feeling lazy.

Edit Thanks to :iconmorphoadonis: and :icontamalesyatole: for pointing out several errors in panel 5.

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This comic. I like it. ANOTHER!

Vision: There were some great pictures in this set of comics, and they resembled the characters, in a way. Problem: some vectors and scenes were used more than once or looked too much like the previous panels', which made the comic seem as if it wasn't progressing much. Also, in the third to last panel, the scene change felt slightly rushed from picture to picture.

Originality: I have read quite a few comics, but this definetly is original. The concept of the each individual parts are in character like they should be, and I could definetly see where Scootaloo/Dash would love a walking, talking version of their idols. Problem: It seemed a little too canon....

Technique: I got nothing to say here, except that you did an excellent job of portraying the characters, with dialogue and facial expressions, and pictures. Thank god for vectors. Problem: As I said before, keep an eye out for panels that look too much alike. Readers don't want to view a flipnote if it's stationary.

Impact: DAYUM! This was genius, and the ending made me LAWL quite a bit. With that being said, SOMEPONY ANIMATE THIS! The mini-punchlines were also quite humorous, and didn't make me go: "Fuck it. I'm out." Problem: None.
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-Great concept, it was both adorable and easy to follow so it retained maximum adorableness despite being a rather awkward situation.

-If I'm not mistaken it looks like you used vectors (like i said I could be wrong) and to great effect. You able to piece the seen while still having it look natural and fluid.

-The dialogue was appropriately done and I felt like it did each character justice. You effectively showed the hidden softness of Rainbow Dash.

-How ever, Twilight Sparkle's reaction to the situation did seem all that in sync with her character that we've have seen from the show. From what I've gathered she'd be more likely to go out there and try to find Rainbow as soon as possible so she could attempt to sweep the mess under the rug like she did in Lesson Zero. Grant it that this a fan comic and nothing by any means has to be spot on in accordance to the show.

-In the second to last frame, Applebloom and Sweetie Belle looking up doesn't feel like the appropriate facial expression for that situation. A slightly reduced eye size would have given a better feel.

Loved the comic in it's entirety, especially the last panel. Epic way to end that part. :D
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IHeartOTR Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  New Deviant Student General Artist
I loved it!!! The fact that Rainbow Dash responded with loyalty which is technically her ... well you know... "thang"

was awesome!!!! ftu toy chica icon ftu toy chica icon ftu toy chica icon 
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CheesycheeseoCheese Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Student
Nice job RD making spitfire your pet :P
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shadowbro1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
ummmmmmmmmmm.............*grabs spit fire out of box* RUUUUN
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dipsydew Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
oh no there's no escape from this room made of fluffy clouds!
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rainbowdashsonicfan Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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flutterpiepinkieshy Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
l..o...l
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dragonflyzMC Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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unikittyrocks12 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
SPITFIRE:HELLO ANYPONY GET ME OUT NOW ILL DESTROY YOU RAINBOW DASH *ROARS* cover mouth* omg
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AdamsCamaroZ28 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
:iconrdfacehoofplz: Spitfire, you don't have wings for nothing!
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:iconstarsword:
Starsword Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014   Writer
That was hysterical! You have gotta do another one. I'll be very sad otherwise. You don't want to make me sad, do you? o_o
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psychopathneb Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Student Artist
is she shiping scots
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shadowdash8910 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
lollol
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:iconcrystal-okami:
Crystal-Okami Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Soooo funny! I mean Spitfire is Rainbows own pet! ;)
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dragonclaw20 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I like how rainbow has a tinny spitfire in a box in the last panel.:D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) Love 
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LightningBoltSuprise Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Student Artist
poor spitfire, she gonna have to be like Mission Impossible: Ghost Protocol in order to get out
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drich65 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
Is that a callout to _The Great Escape_ in the last panel?

Great stuff, with a twist ending. I'm surprised RD wasn't making more of an effort to escape in the tent scene, though.
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lWinged-Thoughtsl Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student General Artist
ajjajajaj, good end
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:iconpieadao:
Pieadao Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HILARIOUS
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SweetieBelle30 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lol spitfire XD
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
took me a while to understand what's going on in the last panel. At first I thought it's just a picture of Spitfire on a box.
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Raven: ......... Really, Alex? Really? I can take having crazy ideas, but being dense means you really are spending too much time with Deadpool.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icondeadpool--plz: :iconsaysplz: Are you implying that I'm dense? :iconsaysendplz:
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Raven: Sometimes, yes. What, you're gonna try to shoot me? Well, you can try, but you will not be successful.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icondeadpool--plz: :iconsaysplz: Yeah, yeah, I know. You're gonna turn into a ghost or something. :iconsaysendplz:
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Raven: I say again, I don't use an image, nor do I turn into a ghost when I use that ability of mine.
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icondeadpool--plz: :iconsaysplz: Well, since you won't tell me how you're actually doing it, I'll just assume that you're turning into a ghost. Like Kitty Pryde. Here, kitty, kitty! Want a tasty tuna treat? :iconsaysendplz:
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Raven: ...... Who's Kitty Pryde?

(OoC: Ya know, it's kinda sad you don't do Child and Serious Deadpool too)
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
In my defense, I'm not the only one who thought that. :)
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Raven: Two people. That's a very big number.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, bigger than one. :)
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Raven: Y'know, your creepy smiles are getting on my nerves.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How are they creepy? :)
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Raven: When someone smiles unnecessarily a lot, their smiles are considered creepy. 'Least in my book.
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Kingpin4682 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
i thought that to, then i read the second to last panel and understood it completely. my mother always said that i needed to read a book from start to finish.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your mother was right. :)
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Bre-Ce-Cuca Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Epic comic!!! Epic La 
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xormak Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dat finale O_o
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
*Raven*: ........ RD has no chance of becoming a Wonderbolt once Spitfire's outta there.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nah, I'm sure Spitfire will understand. :)
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Raven: Understand what? That she idolized her to the point she wants her shrunk to keep her as a pet? Well, she could understand if she wanted Soarin as a pet, and not shrunk, and also in a good way. You hear me? Wait......... Where's the red guy?
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Spitfire would probably do the same to her idol (if he/she is still alive). :)

You mean Deadpool? He had to go home in a hurry. He said something about a chimichanga on fire.
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Raven: You mean he didn't stalk me this? Sighs with relief Finally..... For once....... Anyways, seriously, Spitfire's too mature to be that dumb.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
We'll never know. :)
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Raven: Whatever. Now then, off to enjoy my time without that maniac around.
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Eze667 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
It serves you right Dash lol
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1992andbeyond Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
DUUUUUUUUUDE!! RD's holding Spitty hostage!
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XLUFERX Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I didnt expect that.......
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zombieslayer226 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
XD spitfires in a box
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crowfeather72 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
aha tats awesome
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joehighlord Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
I... don't get it..
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